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History of The sleepover

By sasuke_is_perfect [Current version]

4 years ago Version 1 Perspective story frame (fork) forked from Perspective story frame by a missing user
4 years ago sasuke_is_perfect commented: My mom helped me find typos in my story and things that didn't make sense.