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History of Zelda

By 25jteague [Current version]

5 years ago Version 1 Initial version of Zelda
5 years ago 25sfottral commented: It was good with a happy ending?????? well i liked it so yea
5 years ago chris commented: It's interesting how you get the girl's perspective first and then the dog's, and how the dog's perspective kind of helps the sad ending be less sad. I didn't really understand the third part--maybe ask a couple of friends to play it and see if they understand it? Maybe I'm just thick. It felt pretty heavy and unexpected to have the character kill herself at the end.