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History of Business Trip

By 48qleland [Current version]

5 years ago Version 1 Initial version of Business Trip
5 years ago chris commented: I like how you used randomness!
5 years ago 48qleland commented: Thank you, What grade would this be.
5 years ago chris commented: I'll let Mr. Matthias confirm, since he's assigning the grades, but it looks to me like you have reached proficient. One place I'd like to see you keep working is making variables that affect the story in a longer-term kind of way. Here's a complex example from one of your classmates: a missing story
5 years ago 48qleland commented: Thank You Mr. Chris
5 years ago chris commented: Do you still need help with this story? If so, could you describe what you're trying to do with the time?
5 years ago 48qleland commented: I just decided to not do the time variables, but instead use randomness. Thank for the help.
5 years ago chris commented: ok!