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History of pokemon

By 25wowens [Current version]

5 years ago Version 1 Initial version of pokemon
4 years ago 25wowens commented: Good job, best story ever!
4 years ago chris commented: This is a great idea for a final technical story! It's also a great opportunity to use variables--otherwise you'll be stuck only using each pokemon once, and you won't be able to do things like letting the player find new Pokemon. To get you started, I forked your story (pokemon (fork)) and added variables that let it do what it already does. Now it should be easy to add new Pokemon.
4 years ago chris commented: It would also be neat to add some randomness--you never know if a Pokemon will win a fight, or if you'll find a new one. To do this, check out the code for my story The wanderer. (If it doesn't make sense, let me know and I'll give you a clearer example.)