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History of Snegurochka[The Snow Maiden]

By rasputin [Current version]

5 years ago Version 1 Initial version of Snegurochka[The Snow Maiden]
4 years ago chris commented: This is wonderful. What kind of feedback would be helpful? Are there programming aspects to this story you're thinking about but not sure how to do?
4 years ago chris commented: Here's a book that I found really inspiring as I was starting to think about interactive storytelling. The way stories and games can shape and reshape our world. We use the first chapter in a course I teach for future teachers. I'd love to hear what you think. Also, some day you HAVE to read Bakhtin (The Dialogic Imagination: Four Essays), but it might be more of a freshman-in-college kind of book.
4 years ago rasputin commented: wait why would a story set in the 1600s in russia include text messages