By rasputin [Current version]
| 4 years ago | Version 1 Initial version of Drifting [draft] |
| 4 years ago | chris commented: This is awesome! I particularly like all the evocative language. One thing you could consider doing is weaving the past into the descriptions--the structure of A *better* better bicycle isn't like this story, but studying the code could give you some helpful techniques. |
| 4 years ago | rasputin commented: would they have phones on a post apocalyptic ocean planet? |
| 4 years ago | chris commented: Phones take a lot of technological infrastructure... reliable electricity, cell towers, etc. And no way to get new phone batteries after they wear out. Maybe telegraphs? I imagine if everybody knew about phones (and the possibility of long-distance communication) but no longer had access to them, access to the telegraphs would be highly-valued. |