By 25srahe [Current version]
| 5 years ago | Version 1 Initial version of the end of james charles |
| 5 years ago | chris commented: I'm really interested in how Unfold Studio might help people tell stories about stuff that happens online. This is a great example. How do you plan to keep developing this story? One suggestion from me is that the story feels like it goes by too fast. What if you actually included some of the things James and Tati said to each other? (You could make them text message bubbles using #text-me and #text-them at the end of the line.) What if you added some other online people commenting on what's going down? What if you imagined what each of them was thinking as it happened? |
| 5 years ago | chris commented: Let me know if you get stuck--I can't wait to see this keep developing! |